Charlie II

Day 1. 2:45 pm. Bernard. “—and just keep running!” The English couple grasped hands and skittered down onto the road. In front of them lay a pool of blood interspersed ...

Ideas for our own character? Well, I have one. I'd like to introduce Bernard now since Derrik is on his way out. I'll have him entering soon. I've discussed with ...

Day 1. 2:22 pm. Derrik. Fresh air. I do not like it— Shut up. Derrik was lying on his back on hard concrete. His bloodshot eyes stared hungrily at the ...

A question I think must be asked - and I think this has already been outlined - is, that if God was real, then who is the God/Holy-Creator of Him? ...

2 Twice Rescued Ryder slid off the side of the horse and breathed heavily for a moment. He had never ridden so fast, not even when he was late for ...

1 High Roads and Low Roads The tall messenger sat back easily in his saddle as he trotted along the highway. The road was worn relatively smooth by constant use, ...

Like I said, here I am! Name and title: Ryder of Camelot Class: Middling, he is no peasant, but he has no land of his own. His position as King’s ...

Psst. Derrik is still alive. He'll go through numerous lapses/fits/blackouts throughout the road to his transformation, these will reduce as he gets nearer to his eventual fate. He is already ...

Derrik Where am I? The first thing that Derrik noticed was how much brighter it was in the tunnel. He'd not remembered it being lit at all on the way ...

I was very worried when you told me you were 'writing a kill list' :D . New character bio posted in the main thread. That is the right place, yeah? ...

A new character. Watch out :shock:! NAME : Bernard Grahams AGE : 25 EYES : Pale blue HAIR : Bright blonde, almost white which hangs down around his face in ...

I've spent about 2 months outlining and refining my fantasy story, and I'm sure its gonna be a hell of a lot better that way than if I 'wing it'. ...

*high-fives* 'sup dudette! I thought I was the only one who said that :wink: ! Just a guess, but you strike me as someone who's into poetry :D . You'll ...

Strange. My friend's dad is a dog trainer and I've heard him say something about biting dogs for discipline, but I didn't think anyone would actually do it (I like ...

Spooky! The eyes scare me :shock: . Hang on. Is this subliminal messaging to join a certain (uber good :D) Storybook? Nah. Couldn't be... DL